To Hum or Not to Hum... Part 2

Now this is perfect. I tired the uninhibited humming piece out on the wife. She doesn't like it at all. Its too contrived, too much information. Sit on it for a week. Do you like it? Well, sanguine advice, I suppose, but yes, I do like it. Not only did I write it, it comes from the heart of experience. And experience seldom fails me. More editing, perhaps. Sit on it for a week. It has the same stifling feel that being told not to sing did, and you know what that makes me want to say! "You make sounds all of the time, you know." "Yes, I do know." "It must be a way for you to release energy, or something." Amen. I fear what it would be like with any more of it inside.